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Chapter 4 - The Name Behind the ForgeryThe notary's name was Nora Vale.

According to Detective Brooks, Nora was a licensed Colorado notary who had occasionally worked with real estate professionals throughout the Denver area.

Her name appeared on the document supposedly signed by Elena.

But something was wrong.

The notarization was dated December 8.

Nora's business records showed she'd been attending her sister's funeral in Oregon that entire week.

And three days before my homecoming, Elena had attempted to file a complaint questioning the authenticity of Nora's notarization.

I stared at Detective Brooks.

“So Elena knew someone was forging her signature.”

“That's what the evidence suggests.”

“Then why didn't anybody help her?”

Brooks paused.

“Mr. Miller, I know you're angry. But I need you to understand that we're still assembling the timeline.”

I lowered my voice.

“My wife was being threatened in her own house. She tried to report something, and now she's lying in a hospital bed.”

The detective didn't argue.

“I know. And I'm going to find out what happened.”

We met Nora Vale that afternoon.

She was forty-eight, with short dark hair and an exhausted expression.

She sat across from Detective Brooks in a small conference room at the sheriff's office.

I'd expected someone polished and evasive.

Instead, Nora looked like a woman who hadn't slept in days.

“I never notarized that document,” she said.

Detective Brooks placed a printed copy in front of her.

“Is this your seal?”

“It resembles my seal. But the certificate is fraudulent.”

She pointed toward the lower corner.

“The expiration date is wrong. My commission was renewed last spring. Whoever prepared this used an older image of my stamp.”

Daniel leaned forward.

“Could someone have obtained that image through Cole Baird's office?”

Nora nodded.

“I completed legitimate notarizations for clients his company referred to me. Copies of several certificates would have been in their records.”

“Did you know Elena Miller?” I asked.

Nora looked at me.

“She came to my office about a week before your wife was hospitalized.”

My chest tightened.

“What did she say?”

“She was frightened.”

Nora folded her hands.

“She brought a photograph of the document and asked if I remembered watching her sign it.”

I waited.

“I told her I'd never met her.”

“Then what?”

“She started crying.”

I looked away.

Nora continued.

“Your wife kept apologizing. She said she wasn't trying to get anyone in trouble. She just needed someone to believe her.”

Those words stayed suspended between us.

She just needed someone to believe her.

That was what Elena had wanted most.

Not money.

Not revenge.

Not even an apology.

She had wanted someone to look at what was happening and tell her she wasn't imagining it.

Nora wiped her eyes.

“I gave her a written statement confirming the notarization wasn't mine. I told her to contact law enforcement and the state notary program.”

“Did she?”

“She said she would.”

Nora hesitated.

“Before she left, she asked me something strange.”

“What?”

“She asked whether a husband deployed overseas could lose his home without knowing it.”

I swallowed hard.

“What did you tell her?”

“That a forged deed doesn't legitimately transfer ownership, but correcting fraudulent records can take time and legal action.”

Nora looked directly at me.

“She seemed relieved.”

Then her expression darkened.

“Until her phone rang.”

“Who called?”

“I don't know. But she answered, listened for a few seconds, and turned completely pale.”

Nora took a breath.

“Then she whispered, ‘Please don't hurt Scout. I'll come home.’”

I returned to the hospital feeling as though someone had placed a stone inside my chest.

Elena was awake when I entered.

She sat propped against several pillows, holding a cup of water.

Her face brightened when she saw me.

“Nathan.”

I crossed the room and kissed her forehead.

“How are you feeling?”

“Like I've been run over by a truck.”

I managed a small smile.

“You've always been dramatic.”

She gave a weak laugh.

For a few beautiful seconds, we were simply husband and wife again.

Then her eyes moved toward the doorway.

“Is your mother here?”

“No.”

“Brooke?”

“No. And neither of them is allowed to visit you without your permission.”

Elena relaxed slightly.

I sat beside her.

“I found the memory card.”

Her eyes filled with tears.

“Did you watch it?”

“Some of it.”

She looked down.

“I'm sorry.”

I frowned.

“For what?”

“For letting everything get so bad.”

I took her hand.

“Elena, you have nothing to apologize for.”

She shook her head.

“At first, Diane was kind. She helped with groceries. She made dinner when I worked late. She said she wanted to keep me company.”

Her voice became quieter.

“Then she started making decisions without asking.”

I listened.

“Brooke moved in after her business started struggling. They told me it would be temporary. But suddenly, my office became Brooke's dressing room. Your mother wanted a different dining table. They started using our accounts.”

“Why didn't you tell me?”

The question escaped before I could stop it.

Elena flinched.

I immediately regretted it.

“I'm sorry,” I said. “That sounded like an accusation.”

She shook her head.

“I wanted to tell you.”

She looked toward the window.

“Every time we talked, you sounded exhausted. Sometimes you said you hadn't slept properly in days. I didn't want to add to what you were carrying.”

I squeezed her hand.

“You were never something I had to carry.”

She looked back at me.

“Then the messages started.”

“What messages?”

She hesitated.

“Messages that seemed to come from you.”

My stomach tightened.

“What did they say?”

Elena stared down at her blanket.

“That you were tired of my complaints. That your mother needed to feel respected. That the house had always been intended for your family.”

I went completely still.

“I never said any of that.”

“I know that now.”

Her lips trembled.

“But they knew things only you and I talked about. Sometimes they even mentioned your favorite meals or the little jokes we used to make.”

I thought about our old family computer.

The one that remained signed into several shared accounts.

The one Brooke had been using while I was overseas.

Someone had been studying our private correspondence.

Then using it to make Elena believe I no longer trusted her.

That evening, Detective Brooks called with another development.

Elena's complaint concerning the forged notarization had generated an acknowledgment from the state office.

But a follow-up email had been sent from Elena's address.

The message claimed the complaint had been made in error and asked that it be withdrawn.

“When?” I asked.

Brooks read the timestamp.

“December 11. At 9:43 p.m.”

I checked the date.

It was the night I'd come home.

At 9:43 p.m., Elena had already been taken to the hospital.

Her phone had been missing when the paramedics arrived.

I stared at the hospital bed where my wife was sleeping.

“Detective, Elena couldn't have sent that email.”

“I know.”

“Then who did?”

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Brooks paused.

“That's what we're investigating. But whoever sent it was trying to erase her complaint while she was fighting for her life.”

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